The following piece of writing was written by Gabi after our cross country race.
As I soared through the last bit of the gloomy forest, the finish line appeared before my watery eyes. The beautiful sun embraced me in its warm cloak. A favourable breeze mingled in the misty air. The frost pinched my feet and the birds sang their sweet songs. I was so taken away by this bewildering site that I didn’t notice the deep, dark hole in front of my prancing body. ‘Ahhhhh!!!!’ A startled scream escaped my throat as I fell down into the mossy grass.
As I soared through the last bit of the gloomy forest, the finish line appeared before my watery eyes. The beautiful sun embraced me in its warm cloak. A favourable breeze mingled in the misty air. The frost pinched my feet and the birds sang their sweet songs. I was so taken away by this bewildering site that I didn’t notice the deep, dark hole in front of my prancing body. ‘Ahhhhh!!!!’ A startled scream escaped my throat as I fell down into the mossy grass.
2 comments:
What a wonderfully descriptive piece of writing Gabi!
I like you writing Gabi very cool
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