Sunday, June 17, 2012

Haiku Poems

On Friday Room 8 learnt about Haiku poetry and has a go at writing some about different subjects. They were keen to share their creations with you and they would love to hear your thoughts.



Cats (Ella)
Mouth open slightly
Searching for delicious prey
Pounce! The prey’s caught

Spring is here (Gwen)
A soft breeze flows around
New born roses rise upward
Knowing spring is here

Coldness (Lilly)
Coldness drifting through
Coldness coming back again
Warmness come back please

Spring (Viola)
Spring flowers growing
Trees reach to the horizon
Blossoms fill the earth...

Sun (Dion)
Shining above now
Following me everywhere
Giant yellow sun

Moon (Anton)
Huge luminous ball
That’s glued on a starry quit
The ball is the moon

 Leaves (Aspen)
Colours are twirling
Calling to me as they dance
Very crispy and light

Leaves (Billy)
Flowing in the wind
Brown, red, and bushy evergreens,
Crisp, dry leaves everywhere

War (Izzy Q)
Flowers squashed by soldiers
Once grassy fields now concrete battle zones
Depressing feelings strike my body

Snow (James)
Snow signalling me
Calling for the chill slowly
Melting itself sad

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Thanks for these poems. Your class are posting some well crafted writtne work to this blog. i loved rading all of them especially Viola, James and Ella. Congratulations
Irene Cooper

Celia Coffa said...

Beautiful poems. Some of our students have been teaching each other different poetry styles. You might like to see some of the styles?
http://themiddlematters.blogspot.com.au/2012/06/guest-post-from-james-and-caitie.html
and
http://themiddlematters.blogspot.com.au/2012/06/guest-post-jia-yi-from-senior-primary.html

Mrs Coffa
Melbourne Australia