Cats (Ella)
Mouth open slightly
Searching for
delicious prey
Pounce! The prey’s
caught
Spring is here (Gwen)
A soft breeze flows
around
New born roses rise
upward
Knowing spring is
here
Coldness (Lilly)
Coldness drifting
through
Coldness coming back
again
Warmness come back
please
Spring (Viola)
Spring flowers
growing
Trees reach to the
horizon
Blossoms fill the
earth...
Sun (Dion)
Shining above now
Following me
everywhere
Giant yellow sun
Moon (Anton)
Huge luminous ball
That’s glued on a
starry quit
The ball is the moon
Leaves (Aspen)
Colours are twirling
Calling to me as they
dance
Very crispy and light
Leaves (Billy)
Flowing in the wind
Brown, red, and bushy evergreens,
Crisp, dry leaves everywhere
War (Izzy Q)
Flowers squashed by soldiers
Once grassy fields now concrete battle zones
Depressing feelings strike my body
Snow (James)
Snow signalling me
Calling for the chill slowly
Melting itself sad
2 comments:
Thanks for these poems. Your class are posting some well crafted writtne work to this blog. i loved rading all of them especially Viola, James and Ella. Congratulations
Irene Cooper
Beautiful poems. Some of our students have been teaching each other different poetry styles. You might like to see some of the styles?
http://themiddlematters.blogspot.com.au/2012/06/guest-post-from-james-and-caitie.html
and
http://themiddlematters.blogspot.com.au/2012/06/guest-post-jia-yi-from-senior-primary.html
Mrs Coffa
Melbourne Australia
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